This title is a little confusing. The poor victim’s “friend” tricked her into visiting the site of her rape.
The title is horrendous and that skank ain’t no friend.
i am sorry. english is not my first language. if you can , can you please suggest me any alternative i will change it.
It is best to use the real title and add the detail:
Dalit woman raped, filmed, forced to eat beef by two Muslim men in Uttar Pradesh, after being lured by friend
thank you!
Sure. I didn’t mean to cause offence, it just reads with a different context.
One way to write it could be:
Woman is drugged, raped, and filmed after being in tricked my her friend.
I also removed the Hindu as I don’t think it’s relevant to the story, although it may be relevant where you are.
The Hindu part is relevant as they explicitly forced her to eat beef
You’re right. Going back I even missed the beef in my refactor. Haha. It’s been a long day.
Might want to spell check now.
That’s why I have an editor and also I’m not a writer because I suck at writing 😔
It happens!
“‘Friend’ helps drug, film being gang raped, and force a Hindu woman to consume beef” but I would change the order to go from least to worst, whatever you decide that to be.
The articles I’ve read about Uttar Pradesh contain some of the absolute worst crimes I’ve ever read about outside of war. It must be an absolute hellhole for there to be so many violent crimes that are in the realm of extremely disturbing.
If Uttar Pradesh seceded today, it would be the 4th or 5th most populated country on Earth. Considering all the other circumstances that is a lot of potential NSFL news articles.
They later sent the video to the survivor’s fiance and tried to flee to Kashmir where Nazim’s shop is located. “Based on the victim’s complaint, a case was registered under relevant sections of the SC/ST Act. It was also a case of extortion. All the accused have been arrested,” a senior police official said.
Jeez.
Imagine if only women were allowed to carry guns in India. That’d be a good thing.
Yes. Give everyone guns. That’s worked out so well in the past
What part of ‘only women’ means ‘everyone’?
Lol.
Arming themselves worked for the Black Panthers. All of a sudden they weren’t such easy targets for their cowardly abusers.
What part of ‘only women’ means ‘everyone’?
Lol.
Arming themselves worked for the Black Panthers. All of a sudden they weren’t such easy targets for their cowardly abusers.
In this case the victim was lured by her female “friend”.
Assholes. Glad they’ve been arrested.
…is it not just “group of people do all these things”? Why just the woman in the title?
A woman helping another women get gangraped is something noteworthy if you ask me.
Ah, is it time for the two minutes hate already?
