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minus-squareFredericChopin_@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up31·10 months agoThe title is horrendous and that skank ain’t no friend.
minus-squareruford1976@lemmy.worldOPlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up19arrow-down1·10 months agoi am sorry. english is not my first language. if you can , can you please suggest me any alternative i will change it.
minus-squarelivus@kbin.sociallinkfedilinkarrow-up24·10 months ago@ruford1976 It is best to use the real title and add the detail: Dalit woman raped, filmed, forced to eat beef by two Muslim men in Uttar Pradesh, after being lured by friend
minus-squareFredericChopin_@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up11arrow-down4·10 months agoSure. I didn’t mean to cause offence, it just reads with a different context. One way to write it could be: Woman is drugged, raped, and filmed after being in tricked my her friend. I also removed the Hindu as I don’t think it’s relevant to the story, although it may be relevant where you are.
minus-squareSupervivens@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up32arrow-down1·10 months agoThe Hindu part is relevant as they explicitly forced her to eat beef
minus-squareFredericChopin_@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up5·10 months agoYou’re right. Going back I even missed the beef in my refactor. Haha. It’s been a long day.
minus-squareGhyste@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·10 months agoMight want to spell check now.
minus-squareFredericChopin_@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·10 months agoThat’s why I have an editor and also I’m not a writer because I suck at writing 😔
minus-squareraef@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4arrow-down1·edit-210 months ago“‘Friend’ helps drug, film being gang raped, and force a Hindu woman to consume beef” but I would change the order to go from least to worst, whatever you decide that to be.
The title is horrendous and that skank ain’t no friend.
i am sorry. english is not my first language. if you can , can you please suggest me any alternative i will change it.
@ruford1976
It is best to use the real title and add the detail:
Dalit woman raped, filmed, forced to eat beef by two Muslim men in Uttar Pradesh, after being lured by friend
thank you!
Sure. I didn’t mean to cause offence, it just reads with a different context.
One way to write it could be:
Woman is drugged, raped, and filmed after being in tricked my her friend.
I also removed the Hindu as I don’t think it’s relevant to the story, although it may be relevant where you are.
The Hindu part is relevant as they explicitly forced her to eat beef
You’re right. Going back I even missed the beef in my refactor. Haha. It’s been a long day.
Might want to spell check now.
That’s why I have an editor and also I’m not a writer because I suck at writing 😔
It happens!
“‘Friend’ helps drug, film being gang raped, and force a Hindu woman to consume beef” but I would change the order to go from least to worst, whatever you decide that to be.