Dalit woman raped, filmed, forced to eat beef by two Muslim men in Uttar Pradesh
www.indiatoday.in
The woman was tricked into going to a hotel by her Muslim friend, where she was raped, filmed and force-fed beef by two assailants.
  • ruford1976@lemmy.worldOPEnglish
    191·
    1 year ago

    i am sorry. english is not my first language. if you can , can you please suggest me any alternative i will change it.

    • livus@kbin.social
      24·
      1 year ago

      @ruford1976

      It is best to use the real title and add the detail:

      Dalit woman raped, filmed, forced to eat beef by two Muslim men in Uttar Pradesh, after being lured by friend

    • FredericChopin_@feddit.ukEnglish
      114·
      1 year ago

      Sure. I didn’t mean to cause offence, it just reads with a different context.

      One way to write it could be:

      Woman is drugged, raped, and filmed after being in tricked my her friend.

      I also removed the Hindu as I don’t think it’s relevant to the story, although it may be relevant where you are.

    • raef@lemmy.worldEnglish
      41·
      1 year ago

      “‘Friend’ helps drug, film being gang raped, and force a Hindu woman to consume beef” but I would change the order to go from least to worst, whatever you decide that to be.