• NOT_RICK@lemmy.world
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    10 months ago

    This title is a little confusing. The poor victim’s “friend” tricked her into visiting the site of her rape.

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        10 months ago

        i am sorry. english is not my first language. if you can , can you please suggest me any alternative i will change it.

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          10 months ago

          @ruford1976

          It is best to use the real title and add the detail:

          Dalit woman raped, filmed, forced to eat beef by two Muslim men in Uttar Pradesh, after being lured by friend

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          10 months ago

          Sure. I didn’t mean to cause offence, it just reads with a different context.

          One way to write it could be:

          Woman is drugged, raped, and filmed after being in tricked my her friend.

          I also removed the Hindu as I don’t think it’s relevant to the story, although it may be relevant where you are.

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          10 months ago

          “‘Friend’ helps drug, film being gang raped, and force a Hindu woman to consume beef” but I would change the order to go from least to worst, whatever you decide that to be.