“The corners of his mouth split into a Cheshire cat smile. Waving a stack of documents, he moves towards me, like a wolf closing in on its prey.
Why is it written like she’s an aspiring erotic fiction writer? Who talks like that? I can’t even take it seriously it’s so over the top and editorialized.
Why is it written like she’s an aspiring erotic fiction writer? Who talks like that? I can’t even take it seriously it’s so over the top and editorialized.
No, no-- let her keep going. I’m… I’m into it.